Heaven in your arms.
Utopia in those eyes.
Days in paradise,
Nights in bliss.
My soul,
a small price to pay.
What remains?
Hell.
Copyright © 2018 Penny Wilson
*This is in response to Sue Vincent’s Thursday writing prompt, #writephoto. You can find out all about the fun HERE.
Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come and read Penny’s beautiful and moving poem – “WHAT REMAINS”
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Thank you kindly! ❤
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Reblogged this on Tempest.
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Thank you for the reblog!
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Thank you for this beautiful poem!
Sorry for gatecrashing out of nowhere. I saw your post on another blog and just had to reblog it.
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It’s appreciated! Thank you!
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Hell’s Bells that was good!
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Awwww, thanks Walt! ❤
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You’re very welcome! ❤☺
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When I read this, I think of a domestic abuser who manipulates and charms and traps a woman in his (false) love. She believes his lies, his proclamations of love, even as he strikes her with his hand and/or his words. She wants to believe he will change, that things will get better, that he really loves her. But he won’t and he doesn’t.
I think of all those women who are living this hell. Not because of their choices, but because of the power and control of another person. I pray they will find the strength to break free, to emerge from the hell of abuse as strong strong women.
Thank you for writing this powerful piece, Penny.
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wow, I can see how you would see it that way Audrey. It’s not what I had in mind, at least not consciously. Thanks Audrey.
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That’s the thing about poetry. It’s interpretation is often shaped by the insights of the reader. Maybe your subconscious was working in this piece of writing.
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Maybe. Thanks Audrey.
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Fantastic! Great turn at the end.
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Thank you!
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😅😳😂🤔🤣😎🤩👌🤗🌷🎈
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Excellent write, Penny!
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Thank you!
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