What Remains?

Heaven in your arms.

Utopia in those eyes.

Days in paradise,

Nights in bliss.

My soul,

a small price to pay.

What remains?

Hell.

Copyright © 2018 Penny Wilson

*This is in response to Sue Vincent’s Thursday writing prompt, #writephoto.  You can find out all about the fun HERE

About Penny Wilson Writes

Penny Wilson is a freelance writer who writes in several genres. She's had a successful blog with a growing and loyal following for more than 5 years. Penny has written articles for Counseling Directory .org, Introvert Dear .com, and WOW Women on Writing. Her poetry has been published on Ariel Chart, a monthly online Journal, Spill Words Press and the Poppy Road Review. She is currently working on her first novel. You can find more of her writings on her blog at: https://pennywilsonwrites.com/ and follow her on Twitter @pennywilson123.
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22 Responses to What Remains?

  1. Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
    Come and read Penny’s beautiful and moving poem – “WHAT REMAINS”

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  3. Tempest says:

    Reblogged this on Tempest.

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  5. WaltPage says:

    Hell’s Bells that was good!

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  6. When I read this, I think of a domestic abuser who manipulates and charms and traps a woman in his (false) love. She believes his lies, his proclamations of love, even as he strikes her with his hand and/or his words. She wants to believe he will change, that things will get better, that he really loves her. But he won’t and he doesn’t.

    I think of all those women who are living this hell. Not because of their choices, but because of the power and control of another person. I pray they will find the strength to break free, to emerge from the hell of abuse as strong strong women.

    Thank you for writing this powerful piece, Penny.

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  7. Fantastic! Great turn at the end.

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  8. Excellent write, Penny!

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