They were just ahead. Soon, she’d have all she wanted.
It had been a torturous journey. Having been denied this small luxury was hell. People over there didn’t understand. Still on the tiny plane, she started to imagine it.
The trip had been a once in a lifetime kind of thing and one she would always remember. But getting back to civilization was such a blessing. She was looking forward to her air-conditioned room and her crisp white sheets on which to lay her head. To have a hot shower with all the water she wanted! Heaven!
But the real treasure lay just beyond those arches.
Her hands were shaking, and she was a little weak kneed! She didn’t realize how much she wanted it until she was this close.
Finally, after such a long, long time without it, she stepped across that threshold and thru the arches.
She was the only one there. What luck!
She walked forward and said to the young man in front of her “I’d like your Quarter-Pounder Value Meal with Extra Large French fries and a large diet Coke, please”.
Copyright © 2018 Penny Wilson
**This is in response to Sue Vincent’s Thursday Photo prompt which you can find out about HERE. Go take a look and join in on the fun!
That was…unexpected. Wallie loves it 🙂
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Good! I’m glad. Thanks for stopping by!
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Hehe, now that was a surprise ending! 🙂
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Thanks for stopping by! 🙂
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Thank you Sue! 🙂
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I didn’t guess McD, but thought she’s looking for a place to pee 🙂
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lol! Thanks for stopping by!
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Haha good twist – the 2nd to think of those golden arches this week – and I still didn’t see it coming! 🙂
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Thank you!
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Ha ha. Not something I miss when I travel abroad 😉
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It’s just what came to mind with the word Arch. 🙂
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Actually, I saw an article about upside-down arches for International Women’s Day, so these arches were in the news.
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I saw that too. Very cool. 🙂
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Most unexpected, Peny 😀
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Thanks!
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Good twist.
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Thank you Sweets! ❤ ❤
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Hello Gorgeous, good to see you. Happy Weekend. 💕🤗🌷😎
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Thank you Handsome and a Happy Weekend to you too! ❤
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Reblogged this on Walt's Writings and commented:
A wonderful flash fiction story by my friend Penny at pennywilsonwrites.com! Please comment on her original post.
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Thank you so much Walt! ❤ ❤
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My pleasure dear friend ☺💛
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OMG!! I sure as hell was not expecting that!! Brilliant!! LOL!!
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I’m glad you liked it! 🙂 Thank you!
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You’re welcome! But I didn’t like it. I loved it!!! ☺💛
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I’m so glad. It’s funny, some stuff that comes very quickly, like this one did, get really good responses from people. I did this in about 5 minutes. I hesitated posting it, because I really didn’t like it! 🙂
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Well, I’m glad you did ☺💛
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