Did you hear
it
The sound was
deafening
An intense roar
in my ears
The reverberation
rattled my bones
And thundered through
my soul
Your ego muffled
the sound
But
I heard it loud
and clear
The sound of
my heartbreak
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Penny Wilson is an international writer who writes in several genres. She has written articles for WOW Women on Writing. Her poetry has been published in online journals, such as Ariel Chart, Spill Words Press and the Poppy Road Review. Penny is a member of the Austin Poetry Society. Her poetry has been featured in the publication America's Emerging Poets 2018 & 2019 by Z Publishing and Poets Quarterly and Dual Coast Magazine published by Prolific Press. Penny is an advocate for Mental Health Awareness and has the page "Mental Health Help" on her blog. She writes about the struggles of mental illnesses and Depression. She is passionate about spreading awareness for Suicide Prevention and Domestic Abuse. She expresses her passion through her writings of poetry and life experiences. You can find more of her writings on her blog at https://pennywilsonwrites.com/ and follow her on Twitter @pennywilson123.
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Narcissism/ego can do that. Muffle the sounds of other voices beyond their own and then break hearts. What a powerful poem for survivors to understand that they are not alone, that they were manipulated. That’s how I interpret this particular poem.
Excellent write, Penny!
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Thank you, Susi! ❤
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You’re welcome, dear! 🙂
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Fantastic work, Penny! “Your ego muffled the sound”….wow! I had not thought of it that way but so true! 💞💞💞
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Thank you, Dawn. I’m so glad that you liked it! ❤
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Narcissism/ego can do that. Muffle the sounds of other voices beyond their own and then break hearts. What a powerful poem for survivors to understand that they are not alone, that they were manipulated. That’s how I interpret this particular poem.
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I think your interpretation is spot on. Thank you, Audrey. ❤
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Awesome!
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Thank you, Sadje! ❤
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You’re welcome
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