If you look hard enough, you'll see the cracks and the flaws You'll see the times when I was a coward, a fool and a liar You'll see the lover, the dreamer and the escapist If you look hard enough, you'll find the angel, the devil, the romantic and the vixen You'll see the times when I've been shameful, and I've been virtuous I've been bold and I've been shy I've been daring and I've been afraid I've been all these things and more People see what they want to see If you look hard enough, you'll see... Copyright (C) 2023 Penny Wilson-All Rights Reserved #Name Your Number Challenge Click here for info and to join in!
14 thoughts on “If You Look Hard Enough”
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I love this, Penny!!!! Great title, message and presentation!!! Very powerful and emotional too, Bellissimo, My Dear, Bellissimo!!
I loved the ending and the truth there, but you know me, I heard the whisper at the end:
People see what
they want to see
If you look hard enough,
you’ll see… Everything
I hope you will
remember
the best of me!
And not just
the cracks and flaws
Chuck 😊🎁💖💕🌹
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I appreciate your input Chuck. There’s a part of me that enjoys leaving something to the interpretation of the reader. I’m so glad that you liked it, Chuck! ❤
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True! 😊💕🌹
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loved the ending line summing the idea well . People will see …..
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I’m so glad that you enjoyed it. Thank you! ❤
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So….they will see that you are human? Beautifully expressed, Penny! May we surround ourselves with people who look hard enough to see the heart 💞💞💞
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Thank you, Dawn! Beautifully put! ❤ ❤
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So true, Penny. People do see what they want to see.
You’ve got a strong voice for poetry. Once again, exceptional!
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Thank you so much, Dear Lady. ❤
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“People see what they want to see.” So true. We need to look beyond the surface to “see.” And then when we “see,” we need to care. An insightful poem, Penny.
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Thank you, Audrey. ❤
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Yes! If you look hard. So raw and poignant.
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Than you and thanks fr visiting! ❤
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