My First Elfchen


My Dear Friend, Chuck, over at The Reluctant Poet has been nudging me about my writing.  I’ve been in a bit of a writing slump lately and Chuck suggested that I try the poetry form of Elfchen poems.  Elfchen poems consist of just 11 words constructed in a particular format.  Below is my first attempt.  I hope you like it.
Love
from you
not just today
but for all time
cherished.
Copyright 2020 Penny Wilson

13 thoughts on “My First Elfchen

  1. I loved this, Penny!! I’m so happy for you and for being a great Sport in trying an Elfchen!! This is awesome and with a great message!! 😁💋
    So, this is going to be like chocolate. Once you try it you always want more! So we will all be happily anticipating More!! LOL! Bellissimo, Penny, Bellissimo!
    Chuck
    xoxo
    😘💖🌹🌹

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      1. So, Do you have a name for this that is appropriate for your verse besides – My First Elfchen?? Your words whispered to me and said they think they deserve a real title? Ha!! Don’t forget you next elfchen. You can write one on the way home from work??? Try using the vocal recorder. If you phone doesn’t have one, you can get a free one on the app store.
        xoxo
        😘💕💕💖🌹

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