This is in response to Sue Vincent’s Thursday #writephoto prompt. If you would like to join in the fun, you can find out all about it HERE.
Once, we were so close, I knew your thoughts. You knew mine. Then, life happened. Somehow, this rift formed between us. A chasm that I could never fill, never traverse. I reached across, but you wouldn’t take my outstretched hand. Now the canyon has grown so large, neither of us can reach the other. Copyright © 2019 Penny Wilson
You captured something that can be so hard to put into words.
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Thank you.
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So often we let little things create a huge devise between us.
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So true, so sad. Thank you for the visit!
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Yes Penny you tell this sad situation so well.
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Thank you!
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Well done…
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Thank you!
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This can happen, unfortunately, Penny.
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Yes, it sure does. Thanks for the visit, Robbie.
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A sad story that repeats itself too often. (K)
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So true. Thank you for the visit!
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Thank you, Sue. ❤
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Your heart is beautifully written! ❤
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Thank you!!
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Very sad Penny.
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Yes, it is. Thanks for the visit, Jess. ❤
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You write this style of poem so well, Penny.
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Oh, thank you, Sue! I take that as a huge compliment! ❤
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I love this poem, Penny.
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Thank you!
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Such a strong visual about the ending of a relationship.
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Thank you, Audrey
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