Just beneath the surface is where my heart lies It’s where the truth is Today deserves the truth Yesterday’s shadows Lie Just beneath the surface I become Swimming in circles of change circles of growth My strength is found just beneath the surface Copyright (C) 2018 Penny Wilson *This is in response to Sue Vincen't Thurday #writephoto challenge. If you would like to get in on the fun you can find out all about it HERE.
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The.imagery in this is outstanding Penny! Your phrasing and rhythm make it so powerful when read out loud. Well done dear friend 😊💛
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Thank you so much, Walt! ❤
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You are so welcome! 😊
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A beautifully written poem, Penny.
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Thank you so much!
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And that strength rises above the surface. I see it right here, in your words.
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Thank you, Audrey! ❤
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The spacing is interesting, penny…allowing several nuances of interpretation.
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Thanks, Sue.
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