Broken.
That’s what you said.
You said I was broken.
How do you suppose that happened?
Lie to me again.
© 2018 Penny Wilson
Broken
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Author: Penny Wilson Writes
Penny Wilson is a freelance writer who writes in several genres. She has written articles for WOW Women on Writing. Her poetry has been published in online journals, such as Ariel Chart, Spill Words Press and the Poppy Road Review. Penny is a member of the Austin Poetry Society. Her poetry has been featured in the publication America's Emerging Poets 2018 & 2019 by Z Publishing, Poets Quarterly and Dual Coast Magazine published by Prolific Press. You can find more of her writings on her blog at https://pennywilsonwrites.com/ and follow her on Twitter @pennywilson123. View All Posts
Of all the poetry you’ve written, this one ranks as my favorite for the profound message, the sparse words, the strength therein and the honest zinger ending. This you must submit somewhere to be read by an even larger audience.
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You are so sweet Audrey. Thank you! I’ve been putting more of my work out there, submitting it here & there. But it’s not easy. So many places consider a personal blog posting to have been “published” and they won’t accept previously published material.:(
I’ve got a couple of things out there that I have not posted here for just that reason and it’s just killing me that I can’t share it!
Thank you for always being so kind and supportive. ❤ ❤
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You are wise to hold some of your writing back from here in an effort to get it published elsewhere. I’ve encountered the same issue in having posted something on my blog, thus making it ineligible for publication elsewhere. I’ve learned. But sometimes I forget.
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Sad in a beautifully written way. ❤👧👍
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Thank you!
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Very touching and laced with truth.
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Yes, Thank you Megha.
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Well done my friend 🙂 ❤
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Thank you Walt!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Ooh nice i like that
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Thank you!
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so touching title and lines!!!
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Thank you!
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