Lapse In Judgement

Posted on September 16, 2017 by

Not forbidden fruit, but a mistake all the same.

Such sweet fruit, yet costly pain.

Are you a lapse in judgement?

If my thoughts linger…

Are you a bad decision?

Or a taste for my hunger…

Copyright (C) 2017 Penny Wilson 

 

About Penny Wilson Writes

Penny Wilson is a freelance writer who writes in several genres. She has written articles for WOW Women on Writing. Her poetry has been published in on line journals, such as, Ariel Chart, Spill Words Press and the Poppy Road Review. Penny is a member of the Austin Poetry Society.Her poetry has been featured in the publication America's Emerging Poets 2018 by Z Publishing. You can find more of her writings on her blog at: https://pennywilsonwrites.com/ and follow her on Twitter @pennywilson123.
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6 Responses to Lapse In Judgement

  1. mainepaperpusher says:
    September 17, 2017 at 7:26 am

    This is a great example of leaving the people wanting more. I want to know what that hunger is and where it came from. I want to know the final decision on whether it was a mistake or not. I think this is a mark of quality writing. You read and you are filled with questions and that makes you think more about things in your own life. Well done! ❤️

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  2. Sarah says:
    September 16, 2017 at 12:59 pm

    Very nice.

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