Not forbidden fruit, but a mistake all the same.
Such sweet fruit, yet costly pain.
Are you a lapse in judgement?
If my thoughts linger…
Are you a bad decision?
Or a taste for my hunger…
Copyright (C) 2017 Penny Wilson
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Penny Wilson is a freelance writer who writes in several genres. She's had a successful blog with a growing and loyal following for more than 5 years. Penny has written articles for Counseling Directory .org, Introvert Dear .com, and WOW Women on Writing. Her poetry has been published on Ariel Chart, a monthly online Journal, Spill Words Press and the Poppy Road Review. Penny is a member of the Austin Poetry Society and a member of All Poetry .com Her poetry has been featured in the publication America's Emerging Poets 2018 by Z Publishing. She is currently working on her first novel. You can find more of her writings on her blog at: https://pennywilsonwrites.com/ and follow her on Twitter @pennywilson123.
This is a great example of leaving the people wanting more. I want to know what that hunger is and where it came from. I want to know the final decision on whether it was a mistake or not. I think this is a mark of quality writing. You read and you are filled with questions and that makes you think more about things in your own life. Well done! ❤️
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Oh Linda, thank you so much! Your words mean so much to me! Thank you sweet Lady!
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I tells ’em like I sees ’em. How’s that for great writing! hahaha!
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Thank you Linda!
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Very nice.
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Thank you Sarah!
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