Lapse In Judgement

Posted on September 16, 2017 by

Not forbidden fruit, but a mistake all the same.

Such sweet fruit, yet costly pain.

Are you a lapse in judgement?

If my thoughts linger…

Are you a bad decision?

Or a taste for my hunger…

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About Penny Wilson Writes

Penny Wilson is a freelance writer who writes in several genres. She's had a successful blog with a growing and loyal following for more than 5 years. Penny has written articles for Counseling Directory .org, Introvert Dear .com, and WOW Women on Writing. Her poetry has been published on Ariel Chart, a monthly online Journal, Spill Words Press and the Poppy Road Review. She is currently working on her first novel. You can find more of her writings on her blog at: https://pennywilsonwrites.com/ and follow her on Twitter @pennywilson123.
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6 Responses to Lapse In Judgement

  1. mainepaperpusher says:
    September 17, 2017 at 7:26 am

    This is a great example of leaving the people wanting more. I want to know what that hunger is and where it came from. I want to know the final decision on whether it was a mistake or not. I think this is a mark of quality writing. You read and you are filled with questions and that makes you think more about things in your own life. Well done! ❤️

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  2. Sarah says:
    September 16, 2017 at 12:59 pm

    Very nice.

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