Not forbidden fruit, but a mistake all the same.
Such sweet fruit, yet costly pain.
Are you a lapse in judgement?
If my thoughts linger…
Are you a bad decision?
Or a taste for my hunger…
Copyright (C) 2017 Penny Wilson
Lapse In Judgement
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Author: Penny Wilson Writes
Penny Wilson is a freelance writer who writes in several genres. She has written articles for WOW Women on Writing. Her poetry has been published in online journals, such as Ariel Chart, Spill Words Press and the Poppy Road Review. Penny is a member of the Austin Poetry Society. Her poetry has been featured in the publication America's Emerging Poets 2018 & 2019 by Z Publishing, Poets Quarterly and Dual Coast Magazine published by Prolific Press. You can find more of her writings on her blog at https://pennywilsonwrites.com/ and follow her on Twitter @pennywilson123. View All Posts
This is a great example of leaving the people wanting more. I want to know what that hunger is and where it came from. I want to know the final decision on whether it was a mistake or not. I think this is a mark of quality writing. You read and you are filled with questions and that makes you think more about things in your own life. Well done! ❤️
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Oh Linda, thank you so much! Your words mean so much to me! Thank you sweet Lady!
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I tells ’em like I sees ’em. How’s that for great writing! hahaha!
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Thank you Linda!
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Very nice.
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Thank you Sarah!
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