It has real potential, I know it does. But I’m having a hard time with the direction the story has taken.
I restarted the story once, because the back-story of my characters was weak. I think at that point, I lost momentum. This second time around, the story has morphed into something very dark.
I had no intention of writing anything as dark as this has turned out to be. If I continue with it the way it is, it is going to very, very dark indeed! A horror story.
I guess I’m shocked that my “inner voice” is creating this! I’m half-temped to start the story over yet again!
The basic plot and eventual outcome, the real meat of the story, I feel has real potential!
Do any of you have this kind of problem? Ideas? Suggestions?